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Saudi Arabia Deep in the heart of Mecca, around 3:00 AM, I suddenly heard the sounds of music. Startled, I dashed toward the source of the noise, filled with bewilderment. At a time when everyone else was deep in sleep—or engaged in late-night worship, seeking closeness to Almighty Allah—this particular crowd was up to no good, or as I might call it, pure delinquency. You see, the vast majority of people here in Saudi Arabia, both young and old, stay awake until the Fajr prayer.

That is simply how Zee Baby operates. She doesn’t sleep. I walked into a lavishly decorated parlor that was nothing short of breathtaking, pushing past it to reach the room where the music was blaring. There, I saw a beautiful Arab woman, around 35 years old, sitting with a prayer bead (tasbeeh) in her hand, pulling it through her fingers while pressing her head against her knees, murmuring in a trembling voice. I stopped to listen closely to what she was saying in Arabic.

She was pleading: "Ya Rabbi, look upon me and lift my sorrow. Allah, guide my Zaeenaba. Which of my burdens should I carry first? The loss of my husband, the loss of my parents, or the loss of my two sons after my father turned them against me and drove them away? I chose Zaeenaba over everything. We left everything behind, we left Jeddah and returned to Mecca, but nothing has changed. My father's harsh words followed me, and now even my daughter has rebelled against me. So this is what defying one's parents looks like? She must pay the price. Someone will be paid to kill her so she is forced to leave Saudi Arabia since she has finished secondary school. Today, she has turned the house upside down with non-stop dancing and refuses to go out—just so she can eventually be killed."

My eyes widened in shock. I left that spot and headed straight for the room where the music was playing. "Good grief," I muttered to myself. There was a young girl, about 17 years old, dancing wildly, twisting and turning like a whirlwind. She wore ridiculously tiny, tight shorts that barely covered her backside, and a top that was practically indistinguishable from a bra. The other girls in the room were dark-skinned, just two of them, while the rest were Arabs—though this girl's complexion wasn’t quite as fair as Jannat’s. They were clapping furiously—RAF RAF RAF—egging her on, chanting, "Go on, Zee Baby!"

At that, she spun around again and dropped into a deep shoki dance move. If you looked at her, she was a quintessential Arab beauty, though with a slight mixed-race look. You could tell right away she had a blended heritage simply from the staggering, God-given beauty she possessed. Her hair fell all the way down her lower back, dyed in three distinct colors: red, ash-blonde, and blue. In her ears, she wore up to five consecutive tiny gold rings neatly lined up, looking extraordinarily stunning on her. Her nose was petite and pierced with a tiny gold stud, and her lips—shaped to perfection—also featured a tiny gold stud right on her lower lip, which only enhanced the striking allure of her face.

She was tall, Masha Allah. Her chest was full and brimming with the natural endowments of a Fulani woman. Though she had practically no extra body fat, she possessed prominent, shapely hips—a true Coca-Cola figure. Her eyes were large, though she tended to keep them half-closed. When you looked at her, you might think she was perpetually sleepy, but that wasn't the case; it was just her natural facial structure, with pupils resembling those of a European. That unique feature only added to her striking charm. Her eyelashes were thick and lush, paired with beautifully arched eyebrows. She had a straight, long nose, and a medium-sized mouth—not too small, parted slightly just enough to reveal naturally pink lips, as if she had applied pink lipstick. Perfection itself.

Yet, her personality was unruly, rude, and mischievous beyond measure. She was fearless and never let a slight go unanswered. If you showed her disrespect, she would prove to you that she was superior; but if you showed her affection, she would return it tenfold. In fact, no matter how you approached Zaeenaba, she could handle you.

Suddenly, the phone in her hand—belonging to her friend Jannat—started ringing. Jannat grabbed it, pulled Zee away from her dancing, and spoke to her in Arabic: "Habibty Zee, Majeed is calling you."

Jannat pulled her out of the dancing circle, handed her the phone, and Zee picked it up as she walked out into the parlor. Her mother, Ummi Raiyan, was sitting there, and Zee slumped against her lap while talking on the phone.

"Hello Qalbi, what took you so long to call back? We had an agreement," Zee whined.

Majeed let out a hiss on the other end, ready to hang up, but then he quickly said, "Zee my baby, today I am going to talk to Abbu. Now that you've finished your school, let them come and discuss things, because I swear I am terrified of how Hausa boys are hovering around you. Don't you dare rebel against me just because you said they appeal to you more than our own people!"

Zee let out a kiss into the receiver, flashing a wicked smile. "Qalbi, you know I love you. So, what did you guys agree on?"

He burst into tears over the phone. Zee's eyes widened, her heart dropping. Don't tell me he was also forbidden from marrying me?

"Qalbi, you are a massive, built grown man, and you're crying? What's wrong?" she asked. A laugh threatened to escape her; his lack of toughness meant he barely appealed to her emotionally, because she loved a strong, formidable, fierce man. Someone who could make her cry only through immense gravity—not a man who starts blubbering over a simple disagreement. She let out an annoyed hiss, her mood turning sour.

With burning irritation, she snapped, "Majeed, I swear I am going to hang up this phone entirely! A man should have endurance and bravery. What kind of pathetic excuse for a man are you? Is this how you want us to get married, where I bend you to my will however I please while you sit there throwing a childish tantrum? Who is going to coddle me if I throw a tantrum? Trash!"

"Forgive me, Zee Zeena... Abbu forbade it. He said he would kill me if I ever spoke about you again. He called you a snake's daughter..."

A terrifying, blood-curdling shriek cut him off. Her eyes flashed bloodshot red. Raiyan (her mother) looked up at her, but Zee looked away, terrified of setting her mother off since she didn't want to deal with another full-scale disaster.

Into the phone, Zee barked, "So what? Because they are too cowardly to act? You are the one to be pitied, not me, you spineless weakling! You are the one suffering from the poison of love, Majeed, not Zaeenaba! And I am not a helpless girl—your father is the coward because he's raising a son like you!"

Quickly, Ummi lunged forward and slapped her hand over Zee's mouth. Zee slammed the phone down, pouted angrily, and threw her arms around Raiyan, her mother. Tears welled up in her eyes—bright red tears that looked almost like blood. But her mother, finding the situation entirely beyond her control, couldn't even offer gentle comfort. Instead, she sighed, "Zaeenaba, do you honestly think the way you're behaving is right? Look at your attire! And I told you to stop entertaining boys, yet here you are dragging my name through the mud and inviting insults from people."

"Ummi, what did I even do? Does that bastard's father think calling me a snake's daughter makes them superior to us? Who do they think they are? When death comes for someone, does it spare them? How long has Majeed even been back in his country after finishing his school? Has anyone not seen the striking resemblance between us and that fancy guy?"

Ummi smacked her across the mouth. "Keep your mouth shut! I try to guide you, and you're busy inviting ruin!"

"To hell with them! Majeed himself says even a blind man can tell we look alike. So what did I do wrong that you're hitting me?"

"I just want you to settle down, keep your dignity, and stop wandering around, dancing, and acting insolently. As God is my witness, I have raised you the way a good mother raises her child, but your behavior defies repair. May God guide you! Look at yourself—what decent girl styles her hair like this?"

"Ummina, I was just celebrating finishing school! And besides, I don't want any of those bastards to marry me—good-for-nothing delinquents!" she muttered deep within her chest, wiping away the tears that were now turning reddish on her face. "Ummina, do you even know God?"

Ummi covered her mouth again. "Shut your mouth. May God guide you. I am definitely going to hand you over to someone who will straighten out your life."

Ummi stood up, pouting, and walked away from the spot. Even though her mother was furious, it didn't stop Zee from returning to Manal and the others to resume their wild dancing. They kept it up until the Adhan for Fajr was called, at which point they finally turned off the music. Some of the girls collapsed right where they stood, too exhausted to even pray, immediately falling fast asleep. But Zee and Jannat actually performed their prayers before going to bed; for all her wild delinquency, Zee never played games with her prayers.

Even as she lay down, she ignored Majeed's incoming calls, rolling her eyes at the phone until sleep finally claimed her. She made up her mind that once they went over to Jannat's place, she wouldn't return home until a full week had passed. Raiyan, meanwhile, finished her prayers and lay down with her own resolution: she was determined to get Zee out of the country entirely, even if it meant shipping her off somewhere where God might finally reform her. Knowing her husband was actively hunting for Zee's head in Mecca, it was safer to send her far away, where she would surely receive stricter guidance.

Nigeria Back in Nigeria, around 10:00 AM, I caught sight of a dashing, handsome young man of about 28 years old inside a massive, luxuriously furnished office. He had a phone pressed to his ear, speaking in a calm voice as he half-closed his intoxicating eyes, running a hand through his neat, glossy hair that shone like an Arab's. Just by looking at him, you could tell he was the picture of cool composure. He was fair-skinned, tall, powerfully built, and possessed a broad chest. His face was adorned with well-trimmed sideburns that suited him wonderfully. He had large, slumberous eyes that looked almost sleepy, a straight nose, and two deep dimples that sank into his cheeks whenever he smiled, adding a unique charm to his look. He was a man of commanding presence; one look at his demeanor told you he didn't tolerate nonsense or disrespect.

There was a knock on the door while two separate phones were ringing simultaneously. He ignored them both until the calls died down, then gave permission to enter. The door opened and a nurse stepped in with a solemn expression. He acknowledged her, and she bowed slightly out of respect.

"Doctor, everything is prepared. They are waiting for you to enter the theater," she reported.

In his honeyed, deeply reluctant voice, he replied, "OK, I'm coming."

She walked out. He picked up one of the phones that had been ringing endlessly, pressed it to his ear, but remained silent. As time ran out, the call disconnected. He switched off his phones, placed them on the desk, removed an expensive wristwatch, and stood up with an air of effortless grace and authority. As he opened the door to leave, he bumped into his older brother, Mahabeer, who wore a broad smile.

"Haba, Dr. Sardauna! Ummi Raiyan has been calling you forever and you're not answering! She woke me up with her calls while I was at work, asking if you were alright since you wouldn't pick up."

Sardauna rubbed his head. "Oh my God, my brother, things are completely overwhelming me. I'm literally about to go into surgery right now. We already settled that matter with her—I don't have the time. You're the one going since you just finished setting everything up. How are we supposed to deal with that insolent girl? I swear I am not going; I have work to do. This task is for you, unless you want me to drop dead from heart trouble!" He added that Daddy had been furious, accusing Sardauna of knowing Mecca better and demanding he handle it, but Mahabeer had mediated, pointing out that an older brother should step in.

Mahabeer smiled softly, secretly glad because he actually preferred to go handle the matter with grace. "I know. She said there's a specific conversation you both need to have."

"OK, tell her I'll call her when I come out."

With swift, energetic strides, Sardauna rushed off to the operating theater. Mahabeer turned away with a smile, knowing the eccentricities of his stubborn younger brother: once Sardauna said he wasn't going, he truly wasn't going, especially since he had zero interest in the girl's arrival anyway. Mahabeer walked out, got into his car, and drove toward their family home to figure out how to handle the situation, knowing full well Dr. Sardauna would never show up.

Summary

The narrative cuts between the lavish, chaotic lifestyle of Zee Baby (Zaeenaba), a rebellious, stunning, yet notoriously unruly teenager living in Mecca with her mother Ummi Raiyan, and her conservative, high-achieving family back in Nigeria—specifically her intended groom's family, anchored by the cold, disciplined Dr. Sardauna and his cooperative older brother Mahabeer.

In Mecca, Zee dances wildly, defies her parents, ignores traditional norms, and brushes off her weak-willed suitor, Majeed, while her mother struggles to manage her explosive behavior and fears for her safety due to past family conflicts. To save Zee from escalating dangers and her own delinquency, her family plots to send her away to Nigeria. Meanwhile, in Nigeria, Dr. Sardauna—a stern, no-nonsense surgeon—flatly refuses to get involved in the drama surrounding Zee's upcoming relocation, leaving his more approachable brother Mahabeer to navigate the family expectations and manage the impending clash of cultures and attitudes.

Description

  • Zee Baby (Zaeenaba): A vibrant, exceptionally beautiful 17-year-old of mixed heritage living in Mecca. She is tall, curvaceous ("Coca-Cola figure"), multicolored-haired, and heavily pierced, blending striking Arab features with a rebellious, fearless, and sharp-tongued personality. Despite her delinquency and love for partying, she strictly maintains her daily prayers.
  • Ummi Raiyan: Zee’s distressed mother living in Mecca. Once regretful of her own past defiance toward her parents, she now struggles to discipline her daughter while plotting to send her to Nigeria to escape family threats.
  • Dr. Sardauna: A wealthy, fiercely strict, and formidable Nigerian surgeon. He is physically imposing, handsome, and completely intolerant of nonsense, indiscipline, or distraction.
  • Mahabeer: Sardauna's warmer, more approachable older brother who acts as a mediator for family affairs and smoother social interactions.
  • Majeed: Zee's spineless, emotional suitor who constantly breaks down in tears when faced with resistance, much to Zee's utter disgust.

Analytics

  • Thematic Conflict: The story heavily explores the generational clash of traditional parental expectations versus modern youth rebellion, juxtaposing the strict religious sanctity of Mecca with the chaotic, unfiltered defiance of a spoiled teenager.
  • Character Foil Dynamics:
    • Zee vs. Majeed: Highlights a reversed dynamic where the female lead is dominant, ruthless, and dominant, while the male suitor is overly sensitive and weak.
    • Sardauna vs. Mahabeer: Contrasts rigid, uncompromising authority with warm, diplomatic accessibility.
  • Setting Contrast: The narrative effectively utilizes geographical contrast—shifting between the spiritual backdrop of Mecca (tainted by underground delinquency) and the structured, professional medical and domestic environments in Nigeria—to build rising tension as the two worlds prepare to collide through Zee's forced relocation.

 

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